My memories are often triggered by the oddities of life, sometimes it is a piece of music, a sense in the air, at other times like today, it was the calling of the crows.
It was about this time of the year that reminded me of the first time that I met a lively young antique dealer and fellow poet Roderick Hopper. I was told that he had a short time to live, which was hard to believe for he had such a passion about him, so lively and full of fun.
A few weeks later I was invited to attend the scattering of his ashes on Glastonbury Tor, there was no cleric in attendance because Roddy had long given up on religion.
So here written in poetic style is my true account of those proceedings.
The Witness
For
Roddy Hopper R.I.P.
A rain sodden evening
Friends meet and gather
In a lane ‘tween sacred well
and giant pagan hill.
In each their eyes are
searching - not finding
The one for whom they care
Each remembering,
Still aware.
Before sunset they
turn and walk
Over tarmac path,
through concrete posts.
Along mud, stone tracks.
Over cold wet iron stile.
Upwards over trodden
earth and grass.
Climbing , puffing, panting.
With steadfast tread
None desire to stop,
Nor dare
Onwards on
That great, green slope
Mist shrouded mighty hill
With secret power.
The top at last,
Now friends collect
Breath and breathe.
No sight or sound
comes from below;
We are here alone.
No preacher man
to organise our prayers,
No maudlin hymns
nor false sentiment.
Just true memory
with mindful thoughts
Of a carefree and
Gentle man.
St. Michael’s tower casts
No shadow as friends
Mill around, for each
A handful of blue
grey dust.
For a moment
to cherish, love and hold.
To murmur in quiet tones
As the white mist surrounds.
Ancient time passes
as each does linger.
To cast those precious granules
upon the ground.
Now do we turn
to negotiate
Slippery grass slope.
No steadfast tread
or urgent gait.
But conscious care
to find safe foothold.
Suddenly!
Without warning
a clear segment,
a slice is made.
And we can see
Fresh green land,
silver dykes, distant hills.
Atheist or Christian
“Is this a sign?”
That all is not lost
and
That his Spirit
is Free at last.
© 1978 MRL
beautiful tribute.
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful Mel xx
Grace, on the move.
Just perfect x
ReplyDeleteSimply perfect Mel, simply perfect!
ReplyDeleteLovely picture of Tor in the mist. Beautiful words and a fitting tribute. Heron - thank you.
ReplyDeleteto pause and remember... special moments that linger and have meaning..
ReplyDeleteTo the Crows ... and You..
...he would smile.
Lovely, been writing about Glastonbury and going to visit there soon. A beautiful poem for your friend.
ReplyDeleteLove this especially:
We are here alone.
No preacher man
to organise our prayers,
No maudlin hymns
nor false sentiment.
Just true memory
with mindful thoughts
Of a carefree and
Gentle man.
You do well, you did him well, all those years ago, you bardic treasure!
ReplyDeletethat is simply lovely.
ReplyDeleteLeanne x
Beautiful words, a fine tribute.
ReplyDeleteWhen you feel you are there and the words touch you deeply you know you have read the words of a great poet;)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, full of the atmosphere of the Tor, a place I know very well. A fitting tribute to one who loved it there.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words Mel :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely, lovely words of tribute to your friend. I have such fond memories of being in Glastonbury (1999 seems like forever ago!) and walking up to the Tor on a beautiful midsummer night. Thank you for bringing me back.
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I am very grateful for all of your comments, I kept this one off my poetry blog mainly because I wanted to share it in a special way.
ReplyDeleteSo thank you for the recognition xx
Beautiful entry and words :-)
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